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it was good..
Did your 20 year old girlfriend really get fucked by her doctor?
Feedback is appreciated
Greetings readers. I follow the status of my stories almost daily, and as I see the vote counts rise, I don't see much commenting or feedback. I was wondering what you thought of the story, or why you voted the way you did. It's how I can tell what my strengths or weaknesses are when I write.
Thanks again,
Rickyboxen
Wow
The story was truely horrifying until the end when you made it clear that the doctor and the woman set this up. Somehow, knowing that she consented made the story less horrific.
Interesting...
I really enjoyed the story. The sad part is that the twist is out so I can't suggest a sequel. For shame.
Heart fetish?
I believe I am obligated to give this a rave review, as I am a kardiophiliac, myself (and I also love dark/horror erotica).
I'm absolutely delighted to find some decent material for my bizarre, obscure fetish; and with lovely writing, too! Excellent job. I enjoy the twist at the end.
Thank you for writing this. =)
I'm not alone with my cardio fetish!
At last, i see that i'm not alone with my cardio fetish!
My fantasies of having sex with a woman, who has a (near) cardiac arrest are fulfilled with yur story.
I'm looking forward for more stories about sex and the effects of cholesterol- clotted coronairs of the middle-aged woman....
Heart love?
This is pure awesome. We totally need more heart fetish/cardiophilia stuff!!
More please!
Make a sequel to this story?
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