how about the mom finds out what an ass the father has been and cuts his dick off...really...this story lacks imagination and tenderness....i hope that asshole gets it in his...lol
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Anonymous01/26/06
LOVED IT!
Well I loved it! I thought it was hot hot hot. Write more like this! My pussy is soaking. :D
That was hot... I didn't make it all the way through!
Not a very sweet story, it's totally abusive, but that's what the fantasy is about. It's fun to imagine being so hot, so in need that you don't care what kind of messed up crap is being shoved in your face.
I had to read some tamer fare before this piece to get primed, but this story sent me over the edge. Thanks!
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Anonymous08/10/08
Lost me
I would think it's a universally known fact that 'gullet' and 'baby juice' are not sexy words. Honestly, who talks like that?!?!
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Anonymous01/28/09
somewhat...
it lacks tenderness, and don't know, but... I kind of feel sad bout her expectations at the start of him being the only one for the rest of her life, since those hopes are cruelly dashed. A bit sick, for my tastes.
awesome story so very erotic. like watching a porn film but so much more hot and horny, i just wonder if you are going to write more of you very horny stories. you really should you know your brilliant at writing. the story her daddy's secret was out standing. writing. the story was so horny.
English
this story sucks
how about the mom finds out what an ass the father has been and cuts his dick off...really...this story lacks imagination and tenderness....i hope that asshole gets it in his...lol
LOVED IT!
Well I loved it! I thought it was hot hot hot. Write more like this! My pussy is soaking. :D
Works for me.
That was hot... I didn't make it all the way through!
Not a very sweet story, it's totally abusive, but that's what the fantasy is about. It's fun to imagine being so hot, so in need that you don't care what kind of messed up crap is being shoved in your face.
I had to read some tamer fare before this piece to get primed, but this story sent me over the edge. Thanks!
Lost me
I would think it's a universally known fact that 'gullet' and 'baby juice' are not sexy words. Honestly, who talks like that?!?!
somewhat...
it lacks tenderness, and don't know, but... I kind of feel sad bout her expectations at the start of him being the only one for the rest of her life, since those hopes are cruelly dashed. A bit sick, for my tastes.
TAKING DADDIES COCK TO A CUMMING
awesome story so very erotic. like watching a porn film but so much more hot and horny, i just wonder if you are going to write more of you very horny stories. you really should you know your brilliant at writing. the story her daddy's secret was out standing. writing. the story was so horny.
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