All Comments on 'Don't tell me it is the Season'

in the New Poem Review thread: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=15408586#post15408586

jim : )

I don't think the disjointed first stanza "works", but this poem gets better as it moves along and by the end you have found your voice. Thanks for sharing....

...your voice, your muse - just for one day. I'll take excellent care of them. Another winning gem.

Tess

A well crafted poem, I enjoyed the second stanza the most esp with its similes. Good going

and then 3 more because it is so good. I loved the

way it covers all bases from here to there. sand

...from one sexy poet...sorry for the delay...but thanks.

I won't.

The trials and tribulations of relationships. Tou can feel it not just in the words but in their rhythm.

The trials and tribulations of relationships. You can feel it not just in the words but in their rhythm.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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