by marriedpervs
how original can you get? A slutwife getting honed and boned at an adult book store. God almighty, I've never seen a story like that before....
I will be honest I have read better, but I have read worse.
The anonymous guys - will you get a life , be brave and sign in. Otherwise don't fucking bother with your comments.
If u wanna criticise at least let us know who you are. Be a man, not a fucking pussy!!!!
Loved it! I would love to be this lucky dildo! He gets into both holes at once!
Dee,
I'd love to run into your hot and talented mouth at a glory hole and have you drain my long hot HARD cock.
L.A.Jay
think i know you like to hear if it really is you Dee
you used to live in north of 3198 :) see if you figure it out lol
love to hear if its you ozflash@uk2.net
I have taken my 300 pound wife to bookstores to.watch her suck cock. Nothing like a fatty on cock
good little story, it was fun and sexy.
I think you should work on writing longer stories with more detail.
I see the potential in your writing.
flesh out your story with details to give it a real feel,
and slowly build tension as you go.
You have good skills don't be afraid to use them.
I give this "quickie" 5 stars!!!!!, Just give us a little more and I promise you will be a popular writer here.