by CharlieL
The sex scenes are well described and does tend to make the reader feel hot, however the approach to sex taken by the female characters is a bit too direct.
Another reader said something to the effect that the approach to sex was too direct or something to that effect. I think the whole thing was well done and would love to see the next episode PLEASE
The story was decent, and did what I needed it to do for me, but the dialogue was a little cliché. The sex scenes were hot, but was the literary equivalent of "Showgirls" arousing at first but so plentiful in rapid succession that they lose effectiveness. A solid story, but improvements can be made to enhance it.
He and his mother would have made a good couple, and now that she married Kurt, it would have been really kinky if John got his mother pregnant, and told her husband Kurt that he was the father.
Thanks for the good story
A beautiful loving and very hot story of casual free and easy-going motherfucking by a gifted writer in his 30s. I bet CharlieL was hard when he wrote it and shot a good healthy load at the end. The quote above shows how a mother can get excited and real wet between her legs by what her boy's got jumping around in his pants. That's true more than a scared society cares to know. A mom looks over her tall good-looking boy and likes what she sees, she likes it a lot. She knows that between his legs he's got something that can do her a world of good. Mom's totally aware that her boy's cock is the hardest cock around and that he's got a pair of hot young balls that never quit. For his part, the son is deeply attracted to his mother's mommy-hole, the wonderful hairy hole he came out of. He loves thinking about his mother's cunt and he gets hard, harder than ever before, whenever he thinks about it. Mom notices her boy's big hard on--mothers pay close attention of what's happening in their boy's pants--and her cunt runs like a river. In this excellent story, Johnny does what comes naturally. He sticks his cock up the twat of all his boyish dreams, fucks the living shit out of his mom, she cums like crazy, and he finally unloads his balls, shooting her a huge twatful of creamy sperm. Johnny and his mother agree that her twat looks perfect painted a nice sticky white, so he does it over and over again.
the story of johnny and his mum made me think of the time i fucked my mother in law my wife was in hospital and one day i was wanking my self off and did not hear her mother come in when she saw me the next thing i no she has my cock in her mouth sucking me of till i fill her mouth with my warm stick cum then she pulls her skirt up takes of her knickers and tells me get that cock up me so i do n more get between her legs and shove it up her in one hard ram she moaned a bit till i fill her up with my cum and since that day when ever we got the change i would fuck he hard and fast oh and my mother in law was in her late sixtys but was i great fuck xxxx