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Great
very hot, and i could image the two of you!!!
Can You Say Sexual Assault
If a woman goes to that extreme for 3 little words, granted they maybe offensive to you and if so, you can always leave him. However, your solution could end up with sexual assault charges being filed.
In addition, just because a man ejaculates, it doesnt mean anything. Massaging his prostrate will result in an erection and ejaculation--even from an unconscious man.
Loved but ... no action then?
Loved it. Genuine original scenario... and building upon the story. The only thing is... he might have to feel it by himself, the dildi fully buried up his body... Or maybe you did plan it for a part2?
I assume he died on the bed
He must have died on the bed. There is no other mention of him after the rape, just the wife and her (new)?? girlfriend. They both seem very happy with each other now, or is that the reason he is no longer in the story, he is out of the picture. Of course a 12 " with a very small amount of lubricant would probably leave a lot of blood. Did she gag him to cut the noise? It would take more than the blackmail photos her girlfriend made to stop me from leaving 3 12" reminders in her for a day or so.
I hope the mother used a smaller dildo on her son to change his vocabulary or was it the same 12"?
Now that your surprise language turns out to be ok for the offended girlfriend, is it still ok for the husband too, Assuming he is still married to her.
Consequences?
Anal rape with a large dildo on a poorly prepared victim is going to cause potentially serious injury. We're talking hospitalization and probably surgery. Police may press rape charges against wife and girlfriend. Husband will probably divorce wife; she will lose everything. Wife may hate girlfriend for her part in destroying her marriage. Husband may respond violently.Murder/suicide is a plausible outcome.
Do you really think there will be consequences?
Of course not. In real life this marriage is so over it isn't even funny. Assault, blackmail, etc.. The charges would be unbelievable. So would the hospital stay. But in the author's fantasy world, it's all good. Apparently, even through the pain the husband enjoyed it. I personally don't see how. I guess the author believes that 12 inches stuffed up someone's ass would feel great.
It's just a fantasy story, not even a plausible fantasy story, just fantasy.
Disgusting
Very poorly written. Not enough background during most of it to where people could understand any of the story.
Oh good grief, people...
...you've got to be kidding me with all this negative feedback.
Fiction is defined as "an imaginative creation or a pretense that does not represent actuality but has been invented" -- so lighten up, please.
There are stories on this site that turn my stomach and curl my hair but I respect the authors' right to post them. This one doesn't even come close; it's a light-hearted story about a woman fed up with an insensitive husband. Give the woman a break already.
Brookell - my only comment is that, given the overall tone of the story, I don't think it was necessary to go into detail about what actually occurred with Ray [although I would have enjoyed hearing details about Wanda and Jane together! ;) ].
Cat
Nice work
Story gave enough info was concise and to the point. Husband(in story) would definately remember that day for the rest of his life.
Ok people need to lighten up
Come on people this is not something that would actually happen in RL. I thought it was hilarious. I chuckled all the way through it. How many wives out there haven't dreamed of doing something vile like that to their husbands to stop them from doing whatever habit they have that drives them crazy, not actually do it mind you, just fantisize about it. Wait, gee that's what this story is, a fantasy. Just the vision of my husband in that position sends me into hysterics.
Lighten up.
Great story Brookell.
awesome
Love your stories! Great real life happenings and results. Awesome details and flow. One of the best writers on LE. Wonder if there isn't a way for another chapter here? maybe the lesson is not learned and appreciated? That would be sweet.....
Nope
Time to send someone or ones to jail and get a divorce.
So they raped him
And you never finished the story. I assume they divorced and he got custody. Because even a bad attorney would have threatened them with the Police. I mean they had pictures of their guilt. How stupid can women be? I gave you a "1" because you left the story without a decent ending.
Time for some serious revenge
But you failed to finish the story. Just another failed author. With another failed story.
Some interesting feedback
I considered the story finished, although I can see why some of you didn't. What happens next is left to your imagination. How will Wanda react? Does Jane get something she obviously wants or is she left disappointed? As for the whole 'rape' and legal action -- you folks do realize it's just a story? It's funny, I get a little revenge-time in another story (Blackmailed for Party) and get some negative feedback on taking things too far -- yet here I get some negs on not going far enough? Oh well, you cannot please everyone, can you?
The premise behind the story actually started with a guy I used to work with who has the most annoying habit of biting his nails. I mean in meetings, in from of customers, all the time. It was incredibly annoying and I used to think of ways to break his bad habit. I know, not realistic, but the last time he actually spit out a cuticle and it landed on my skirt . . . I could have easily done this and it would have been bigger with no lube! :-) Actually knowing him, I bet he wouldn't have felt it ;-)
Again, thanks for the feedback, the good and the bad. I hope it improves my writing.
Unfinished garbage
Of course he went to the hospital after they raped him. He would have had some severe damage. When the Police got involved, the women were arrested. They had made pictures and those pictures were used to help convict them. Since they were found guilty of illegal restraint, kidnapping, sodomy and rape they spent many years in jail. The divorce he got was a slam dunk since she was in jail. He got all the assets and full custody. Her kids were fully grown by the time she was released from prison. He had sold the house and moved away - no forwarding address. With felony convictions on their records, both women lived out the remaining years of their lives in poverty. How's this story working for ya now ladies? Fuuuuuuck you! So many screwed up things about this sorry story I don't know where to start. Wait! Yes I do. Finish your damn stories.
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