Very erotic until the condom was mentioned. In these fantasy stories, condoms should not be even mentioned--what more erotic than to fill a womb with sperm that might go on to make a baby. In fantasies, there does not have to be midnight feedings, varicose veins, and diapers except as written in a case for them. Fantasy fucking does not have to worry about STDs and pregnancies.
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Anonymous12/28/05
Hot - I'm wet...
... well paced, whether it is fantasy or reality, this is what love is about. If it is reality the condom belongs, but if it is fantasy, then the condom can be forgotten - of course then there will be those ?? that will comment on that too.
Seems some readers focused in on one line about a condom, one line of hundreds. The flow of your story was at the pace set by the action and the emotions of the characters. It worked! Your wording envoked passion and heat. If there were a vote higher than 5 I would have given it to this creation.
English
Great story...
Well-written and fun. Thanks!!
Very, very sweet indeed
That reads more like a memoir than a fantasy - and if it is, congratulations, it sounds wonderful (and he was a lucky lad).
Disgusting
Very erotic until the condom was mentioned. In these fantasy stories, condoms should not be even mentioned--what more erotic than to fill a womb with sperm that might go on to make a baby. In fantasies, there does not have to be midnight feedings, varicose veins, and diapers except as written in a case for them. Fantasy fucking does not have to worry about STDs and pregnancies.
Hot - I'm wet...
... well paced, whether it is fantasy or reality, this is what love is about. If it is reality the condom belongs, but if it is fantasy, then the condom can be forgotten - of course then there will be those ?? that will comment on that too.
Magnificent!
Seems some readers focused in on one line about a condom, one line of hundreds. The flow of your story was at the pace set by the action and the emotions of the characters. It worked! Your wording envoked passion and heat. If there were a vote higher than 5 I would have given it to this creation.
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