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Really Something?
Swell - a sweet portrayal of gang life - makes ya wanta be in a chess club.
This was a fans fantasy eh - Was the fan a girl? Didn't think so.
You are a good writer lady but why are you like that?
Do you feel erotic now?
Bullshit
I have grown to expect this kind of shit from you.
Don't Just Stop
Even fantasies need some sort of denoument. You have to finish the story - give us some sort of ending. Don't just stop. It leaves us without the necessary satisfaction.
Get over it people
You already know it's a NonConsent/Reluctance story, so it you don't like gang bang stories that involve non-consent, why did you read it?
Do you feel morally superior? Get over yourself.
Thanks for writing this Angel. Hope you finish the days of Christmas sometime.
As usual...
Angel.. as usual i loved it.
Ignore all the negative rubbish written. Your great.. and even though gang rape isn't my forte on stories.. it made me horny.. it severed its purpose. Thank You so much.
Great
If you dont like nonconcent storys then dont read them. simple as that. personaly i love this and every other story i have read by her. mostly i like the group sex ones but all of them are great.
As Always I loved it...
The COMPLAINERS need to get a GRIP, this site has something for everyone! so go find yours. keep up the good work!!!
Not bad but not great
I felt it was missing an ending and; pardon the pun, but a climax as well. You are a gifted writer with a great eye for details but this story seemed to be missing them in the sex pieces. I would have liked more detail in the intercourse. It seemed that the girls were taken this way and that didn’t like it and eventually took a shower together.
One of the best if read in ages keep up the amazing work;)
Love your work
What is wrong with people who read a story titled Gang Bangs and then get offended? Loved to read Ginger and Mary being pounded - worked fine for me. The more cocks in the fewest holes the better. I'd like to read what they all get up to next - Mary and Ginger getting a taste for risk, the guys gangfucking their way to enlightenment.
Good story, silly comments
An older one of yours I missed, but of course I see people left silly comments back when it first came out. Get over it guys, women have rape/ravishment/gangbang fantasies too. Great work of course!
why is it so hard to accept that not everyone loves it?
Ginger was dry and unwilling, yet she fights an impending orgasm... ? To me, this is crap.
If you like it, you may. Please respect my opinion.
And to those who feel the need to bitch and moan about me acctually saying something negative about this story; this author put this story up here by his/her free will. If the author does not want opinions there are two alternatives:
1. Dont post.
2. Turn off the commentary.
Have a nice day.
Forence
Forence - just read your comment on my gangbang story... I'm not entirely sure why you were defending the others because there's something you did that's VERY different from a lot of comment I get on stories like this. You said WHY you didn't like the story and your reason WASN'T because you don't like gang bang stories. That's very different from a response "this is the kind of shit I've come to expect from you." Questioning why someone who doesn't like my writing continues to read it is pretty logical and I appreciate the readers who take the time to defend me.
This is an older story and, at my point now, I agree with a lot of the commenters that it's not one of my best, and very much for the same reason that you put down. Yes, I put this story out there for people to read and (hopefully) enjoy, but it really doesn't make sense for someone who either doesn't like my work or doesn't like gang bangs or the non-con category to read this story and then comment on how sucky it is without saying why they think so... ya know? And I do believe that's what the defending comments were referring to.
fun house
You have giger and Mary enter a house full of 15 men/boys and they say YES to everything!!
You are a made ritter of this type of story!!
Keep ritting more of thes style!!!!!! One of my all favorights.
Only then will we all dominayte Pierce out doode.@
Fantasy
This is one of my fantasies. Great story it made me so hot and horny!
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