Absence of Desire

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A pretty dark read
Of something that's missed...

Honestly...

I can honestly say I have never been moved as much by a poem as this one. I could feel the loss the loneliness and a sense of passion forgotten.

Wonderful, it moved me deeply.

:(

Lots of emotion in this poem ~ I am sure it will hit home with many people who read this...

~Honey

Powerful

Wonderfully deep and powerfully poetic. I love this Aurora. Nicely done.

Harry Leg

I FEEL DAT!!!!

Yeah I can relate to this one. I been ther done that and this poem really touches home.

Mirrored expession. . .

I read your words and saw myself. Each tear you shed was one I too have shed. The whispered. . ."It's okay, is the same one I have whispered too." Kiss my friend. ~ Red

Unspoken and Understood

Wow... not often is a perspective so clearly understood in short bursts of emotion. The view as seen through her eyes - like a memory - yearning to experience something unknown ... something deserved and endlessly deprived... I truely felt the deepened sorrow... the unyielding questions as to why so lost... so painfully alone...

I love this piece.

Wow! I love that! I've talked to so many women friends who have tried to explain that feeling, and you just told me all I needed to know in a few lines.

due to the shortage of decent stories ive been reduced to read poetry