I like stories involving an older woman seducing a younger woman, I also like stories that involve a dominant/submissive relationship between two women. Your story fits the bill with both of these.
At first I was a little put off by Peggy as a predator but was quickly enthralled with the tenderness, sexyness and honesty of the story. Great read!
I loved the way you slowly built the intensity. Well done. Are you planning to continue this story because I believe that it has grat possibility
i agree with rbenne, this is an excellent opening chapter please, please let us have some more about these two.
I would have liked a bit more reluctance from Madeline. Just my opinion. Otherwise, it was quite nice.
mmmmmm 2 be madeline and be "taken", made to worship her ass,,, ooo yum looking for more, love your stories warmly carrie
Please continue this story! Thank you, L
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A sweet and sexy little tale
I like stories involving an older woman seducing a younger woman, I also like stories that involve a dominant/submissive relationship between two women. Your story fits the bill with both of these.
Loved it!
At first I was a little put off by Peggy as a predator but was quickly enthralled with the tenderness, sexyness and honesty of the story. Great read!
A Great Start To What Could Be s Great Story
I loved the way you slowly built the intensity. Well done. Are you planning to continue this story because I believe that it has grat possibility
I AGREE
i agree with rbenne, this is an excellent opening chapter please, please let us have some more about these two.
:x
I would have liked a bit more reluctance from Madeline. Just my opinion. Otherwise, it was quite nice.
ooooo 2be
mmmmmm 2 be madeline and be "taken", made to worship her ass,,, ooo yum
looking for more, love your stories
warmly
carrie
More please!
Please continue this story!
Thank you,
L
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