All Comments on 'The Vegas Adventure Ch. 14-17'

Hi,

I loved every bit of it. It has the potential of becoming an epic. Please restart this and take the husband and wife to the next level... Please...Please...Please...

tofrom some place. I think she made love to me a time or too in a story and in her e-mails.

Great story. Please keep it up. Do think that Raven needs to find out what the nieces have been doing to De Ann and Trent. She might be too happy and decide to punish the girls for interfering with her De and Trent toys. Maybe girl loving Stacy could find out what it's like being worked over by just as cruel a group of men and Ashley can find out what it's like have really Domme Women abusing her.

Love the dominance and submission stuff.

read the entire series. above average erotica. well written, good grammar. De needed a humiliating facial at the mall. Maybe a few teens blowing their wads on her face!

HillRious, i loved it. You have devious mind.

This was devinitely excessive. I hope someone tortures her in return .-.