All Comments on 'Home for Christmas'

by Richard Norman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good story untill,

why did you ruin a great story by that strap on shit?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
what everybody needs

great story,every young man dreams of. and a dick in the ass to boot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
No. Just no.

Crude language, terrible descriptions, abrupt endings to paragraphs, poor punctuation...get an editor, and some writing advice.

SexxyMe66SexxyMe66about 1 year ago

Pure TRASH!!!

Only full description of sex was him getting a pole in his hole!! Who risks FLU screwing U??

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