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Great start! Keep more coming!
You're off to a great start---hurry with more!
good job
i hope you write more. it's really good.
MORE !!!!
MORE PLEASE AND SOON !!!! I LOVE THE START OF THIS STORY .
MORE!!!
KEEP GOING PLEASE. IT IS A VERY GOOD START.
Great Start
This looks like a very promising story. Look forward to reading more.
Good start, but
I want to see how he digs humself out of the grave. Thank You. Ronnie W.
too short....
Whata dick! Lol
Way to short of a chapter
Can we at least get a complete chapter next time
Don't leave us hanging, please continue this story.
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