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Beautiful Mistake Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by walkingeagle12/31/05

Great start! Keep more coming!

You're off to a great start---hurry with more!

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by Anonymous01/01/06

good job

i hope you write more. it's really good.

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by Anonymous01/05/06

MORE !!!!

MORE PLEASE AND SOON !!!! I LOVE THE START OF THIS STORY .

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by Anonymous01/16/06

MORE!!!

KEEP GOING PLEASE. IT IS A VERY GOOD START.

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by Anonymous01/28/06

Great Start

This looks like a very promising story. Look forward to reading more.

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by Ronnie Wachuka02/09/06

Good start, but

I want to see how he digs humself out of the grave. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by Nightpleasure05/17/11

too short....

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by london10112/17/12

Whata dick! Lol

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by Anonymous07/01/16

Way to short of a chapter

Can we at least get a complete chapter next time

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by Anonymous11/13/16

Don't leave us hanging, please continue this story.

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