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by sack12/27/05

very nice....

I don't like a "stop-motion freeze" as it literally stops the progress of the poem. How about "slow" instead of "stop?"

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by LeBroz10/30/06

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A rather harsh time
To be introspective
In the cold of winter.

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by duddle14601/27/07

cold

A visit to old man Winter ~ with beautiful imagery.

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