"My pussy will sure like to meet you cock personally"
"You're quite big just as Jane told me"
"I could see that you have build up quite a tent down there"
Try listening to how real people talk to each other. Nonsense like this really detracts from a story.
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Anonymous09/09/06
Get Serious
The intent of your story was great. Most was okay but what ruined it for me was the guy shooting his load three times in a row.......did three girls and did not slightly lose his erection. Don't think so
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Anonymous12/20/13
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Real people just don't talk like this . . .
"My pussy will sure like to meet you cock personally"
"You're quite big just as Jane told me"
"I could see that you have build up quite a tent down there"
Try listening to how real people talk to each other. Nonsense like this really detracts from a story.
Get Serious
The intent of your story was great. Most was okay but what ruined it for me was the guy shooting his load three times in a row.......did three girls and did not slightly lose his erection. Don't think so
mmmmmmmmmmmmm
I don't know because I didn't read it.HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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