My Initiation

brilliant!!! at last a story that isn't all about the sordid side of sex!
a story with a real sense of love, life and the underlying lust that's in all our minds

fantastic writing

this is the best piece of writing i have viewed on this site , i loved every word the descriptions of the lingerie were exquisite just wished that I could have been there it seemed so real

great story

This story was very well written kept me going from one page to the next. Keep it up.

It's 'our' initiation too.

Interesting...just enough sex to know it's in the right category but it's covered by the gentle transformation of the storyteller, without the gaudy appearance of most of the stories of a similar vein that I've read here. You did well, convincing me that this was a transition that could happen in real life, were the money for the extensive wardrobe changes really available...but it's just an example of fantasy fiction, correct? (And speaking of "correct," there were several spelling errors that the English Major in me caught--you'd do well to have a fine piece of literature like this gone through by an editor; I imagine the powers that be here could offer you that service.)

FANTASTIC!

I felt drawn into this story. I wanted to be the one shown her transexual side. I envy their ability to be their selves the rest of their lives. I want to see more on their progression. I hope these characters begin hormones and share their long transition on hormones with us. I want to learn and cum from their breast and other developements.

Interesting proposition

Initiation, training and submission! You pulled all of us in with soothing, hypnotic thoughts and words only to leave us with emptiness - still waiting to hear more. You realize you've created a following out here seeking this new universe that only exists in shadows, people hiding to protect their private pleasure cultures. Stories like this give perfect meaning to the phrase "out of the closet". Your crafty creations here will live on in the minds of your readers.

"Very good," says another humble servant.

A Writer's Writer

Whoever wrote this is a professional writer - or at least, has written a great deal in one genre or another. And as a fellow Englishman and still learning the joys of cross dressing and bi-sexuality, I applaud him or her. Well done! X

Fantastic

A lovely sexy story

A good read

An Absolute Fav!

This is truely a beautiful story of two people falling in love, that it has to do with 2 TVs is amazing, yet its written in a way that allows you to come along for the ride, without losing any sense of reality. PLEASE continue this story, I'm sure we would all love to read more of these two people, and thank you for writing such a beautiful story for us all to read!

excellent

Beautiful, excellent, hot, sexy, turn on story! Awesome. Unique. Congrats!

Another fav

Very sweet story! Wonderful ending!

Nice writing!

Slowly and carefully developed,with a logical ending. Brits can do some of this fantasy stuff in a way we Americanos cannot. A logical and endearing progression of the plot.

Nicely done!

Finally, a story that is positive and endearing. I'm so tired of the power plays and domination that seems to proliferate here and connected to transformation. It doesn't always have to be something forced or coerced and you've offered an great example of a loving relationship well worth multiple reads. Nicely done.

Your other story "A Flash of Lace" is equally well done and positive.

The Dream

I dissolve into a story so well written that one sees ones self as the character. The descriptions, feelings,not words.
Thank you for the memory. Now to seek!

Love Story

Absolutely the BEST story that I have read here on Lit. Talk about transformation! Questioning a lot of my feelings after reading this, wondering what I may have missed in my 61 years. Absolutely great story!

very touching story

A true love story. They didn't care what they were. Just loved each other!. Very well written, good detail and I enjoyed it very much. Even a little jealous!

Well that was ugly.

And the "true" tag just made it worse.

Ugly? Ugly?!?

Why in the WORLD would someone choose to label this story as ugly? Momma once said, and so have a bunch of other people, "If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all!"

The person that called this story "ugly" should take a page from momma's book and keep silent.

A few hiccups, and I have to admit a few times where I skipped over the descriptive parts, but otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. When I began reading, I really thought that the guy taking Michelle out would be the guy to her girl and was surprised when she dressed him up. Even more surprised when he segued so smoothly into she.

All in all, I like the story, like the writing, and like the ending. Please ... disregard the "ugly" comment. I do believe that everyone has the right to express themselves, but without some sort of constructive criticism ... "Well that was ugly," is just ... well ... ugly.

The Only Thing Ugly About This Story...

...Is its from 2006 and no additional chapters written! Thats horrible and almost makes me want to cry that this author has stopped writing such beautiful stories as this one. That there's yet another anon comment as stupid as the "that was ugly" one doesn't surprise me. Over the past couple weeks, someone has been leaving little nasty comments that make no sense on many of the more romantic author's stories, and I'm pretty sure they have made attempts to pull down the ratings of these stories by logging in under several dozen faked IDs and scoring the title low (a 1 for instance), and if they keep it up, they will be caught.

Amazing!

To this day, this is my favourite story on all Literotica! :)

I'd wish there was more, but I think this story is perfect as it is.

Great love story

I really loved the writing, especially the very good descriptions of how dressing in lingerie, and other women's wear felt. So very well done. I would like to meet a Michelle!

Just Marvelous

This is the best story and I think it is marvelous, erotic, sexy and a great love story. It would be something any true gurl would want to happen to her. I just loved the story line and characters described along with the details of each event. I am glad this took a time to develop as this added to the excitement of waiting for "So what happens next." If anyone has put on female clothes and lingerie you would know the wonderful feeling and excitement of that experience, something you never want to end. I too am sorry this author has not written more on this story as I would love to hear what happen next. Looking forward to running into my Michelle or Steve for that matter.

Absolutely excellent story

One of the best I have ever read, I wish I could be so lucky to find the love the found

3rd time!

It's been several months but it is the 3rd time I've read this story. Enjoyed it each time!

First Story

This is the first story I have read on Literotica and if they are all this good I will be delighted

This is a well written erotic story

needs more chapters to where they both get the srs done

Beautiful Love Story

Probably the best story I have ever read on Literotica. Came twice reading it. YUMMY!!

Just amazing

I really really enjoyed this story it got me so aroused as this would be a dream come true for me

Dreamy!

Finally a story without bondage or violence, just dressing and love. My compliments.

Really Well Done

You address so many fears and desires in this one short story it's amazing. Well done.

Lovely story

I felt a real connection to the characters. Thought I would cum when they first made love. well done

the best ever

would love the same.xx

Great story please keep it going!

I love the story please keep it going.

Feeling so hot.

That story is so well written and so very hot with raw emotion. My pussy is so wet reading the story. Can;t wait to read more of your stories xoxo

What a beautiful story.

Such a fantastic story, very erotic I am so jelous of those girls

Fantasy cum true

Great story well written. Have had similar fantasy and love to read this one over and over. Makes me cum!

perfect! a dream of my own

A wonderful opening, a sweet and sex middle. ...and a happy ending that, honestly, earned a couple of tears💋

Amazing passion

This is one of those stories I come back to again and again. It gets me hard throughout and keeps me hard and dripping. It is the relationship I wish I had!

A beautiful love story

Just the best love story, well written. Thank you.

A Beautiful Story

That is a great story erotic but smooth well done

Trans

I read this lovely story because it brought back my own feelings when I was 29, I had dabbled with bisexuality since I was a teenager....at 22 I got married to a wonderful sexy woman who knew nothing about my past 'leanings'....having also worn lingerie for men ( usually older ) I started dressing again ...at first with Lynn's , then gradually I built up quite a collection of my own...it came to an abrupt stop when Lynn caught me in front of the computer dressed in stockings,bra and panties being watched by a few men online as I stroked my cock for them ( she exploded calling me all sorts of names...and to be truthful,she was right )
From that time on, our marriage declined ...then she met a REAL man ( as she put it )... Divorce followed soon after and she left the area when he got a job in the south of the country....then I met Dave( online of course )
Dave too was divorced , same as me ,he was caught dressed but sadly 'outed' by his wife ( mine didn't ...bless her )
He had moved North after his divorce and was seeking like minded friends

Beautiful

beautifully written, sensitive and felt real. Fairy tales can be the life we wish to have. and the lucky few get to have it, xx

Great Story

This is the best story I have seen on this site. It was written really well and the plot was so real life

Initiation

Mine happened when I was 17.... my aunt ( bless her ) had arranged for me to have piano lessons with our music master from grammar school ( Ken )... He was also the musical director of the local 'am- dram ' society
The first few weeks were predictably boring, playing scales etc and learning to read and write music....he always stood very close by my shoulder at the piano and was very patient ( he had to be!!!...I wasn't a natural )
On the 4th Sunday he gave me some different music to try and play, saying it was for the upcoming Xmas show they were doing ( Peter Pan ).. as I grappled with it, he asked if I would join the group .... I thought about it then agreed...he said I would make a perfect Peter, being small and slim ( a bit girlish really ) and disappeared upstairs ,returning a few minutes later with some costumes over his arm
I finished my playing and he said I should try on the costume, so I did in the hallway ( it was far too big )... Then he said why not try on the Tinkerbelle costume....I was a bit reticent , but he persuaded me....I went into the hallway again and took off my pants and underwear etc and pulled on the white tights, before stepping into the tutu...the effect was incredible...the feel of the tights on my bare skin was electric and I was getting an erection...trying to hide it I went back in to the room where Ken was standing by the piano
' oh yes ...much better ' he said walking towards me , then kneeling down he 'straightened my seams' ....his hand accidentally brushing my 'bulge'
all he said was ' my my ..you like these tights don't you '
I couldn't speak ( mouth too dry ) as I felt his hands wandering all over me....my cock was rock hard to his touch , then he stood up and pulled me close to him and I felt his hard cock prod my stomach ( he was a bit taller than me )
He then stood beside me, his hand gripping my cock and asked if I liked what he was doing....I nodded yes and felt powerless as he slowly undressed me before laying me back on the couch, my aching cock sticking straight up...kneeling on the couch, he bent over and licked the head ( I came so hard it was all over his face )

Great story

Excellent story very well written so erotic