My Initiation

Great

Loved it & fantastic, wish it were I mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

OHHH MYYY

Pleaaasssseee Continue. I really want to find out what happens.

A gem

Superb story, very well written. Thanks for the pleasure - and keep writing :-)

Wanting be in the story too

Beautiful story and I loved the build up, No wham bam but just exciting romance leading up to the moments of fully having each other. Will be looking for more of your writing. Thanks

Excellent

Besides it being a wonderfully written story, grammatically and spelling wise, I was drawn into its characters.

Keep up the good work.

Not sure about the ending*

A terrific story to be sure, but right at the end, the part about making the transformation medically was kind of a shocker; not sure if that means removal of the male parts altogether or not.

Well Done

You wrote a good one here. As a person who lives in this lifestyle I enjoyed the way the two met.

Left Hanging

I really enjoyed the story. I do hope there is more to it. I am waiting to see how it continues.

Wonderfull!!!!!!

Wonderfull story, I wished it were me in the story!! Such attention to details such as the feelings, emotions and of course, wonderful discription of the clothing.

Excellent

A great story.

Excellent up to Ending

The story is exceptionally well written and provides enough details to make it believable. However, the transformation ending is a letdown for me and just does not seem to fit the rest of the story.

try it

you say you are not gay. thats fine. but i would love to lick those beautiful cheeks, pull down your virginal white panties, spread thoes cheeks and bury my face in you...sucking, licking, ramming my tongue in you. i bet if a very few minutes i could suck some wonderful cum from our clit.an ass as lovely as yours sould be licked, sucked...fucked. try it darling.

They Wuz! I knew it! I new they wuz!

Them boys'r cocksuckers! Dressin up like wimen'n prancing round. Them's says, Iffin it quacks like a duck, and Iffin it walks like a duck, well, then, it done be a duckie. Yassir. Them little cocksuckers heading down to that bar for some prick teasin. They most likely getting some on the side too.

exceptional writing

This was an exceptionally well-written short story. The subject matter wasn't quite to my taste, but I was drawn in and read on to the end anyway. The typos and punctuation errors are the only thing keeping it from a 100-vote.

Erotic

I loved your story and do hope you write more along the same lines.

Hot transexual tale - maybe lags at the end

One of the best of this genre.

Disgusting

It's disgusting if you ask me. Very poor. A real let-down. And I know a lot of people are going to disagree but I don't care, it's disgusting.

Good story

Even though i am not into or interested in cross dressing, this story was interesting to read. It is well written and kept the readers interest alive.
Keep writing and i will check up on your other stories too, If any.

Enjoyed it very much

This story was very romantic and sweet. It brought back memories of falling in love for the first time - both people want to move forward, but both are afraid to push the other too far. The idea of "we're not gay" would ordinarily make me cringe, but it works in the story (and the characters work that out in the end). I would've rated it a 5 if there had been a little more proofreading done. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

good stuff

i thoroughly enjoyed your story. It's very well written, your dialogue is excellent, the characters are vivid and the descriptions are also right on.

Wonderful

oh what a wonderful story. I have searched high and low to find such a beautiful crossdressing story.

thank you so much for taking the time to make my dream come true

Thanks
julie

don't ever stop

this has got to be one of the best works i've ever found.
love, exceptince, sex, men, embracment of differences, wounderfull development of story an characters.
this is almost exactly what a fantasy story should look like.
don't ever stop writing like this

Excellent writing

A well written story with well developed theme. Keep writing as you have a good skill. You have found a nice balance between narration, verbal interraction and action. People who pan others work and then dont have the guts not to be anonymous should make the effort to write their own stories to put their money where their mouth is!!

Will be looking out for future work by you.

Delightful story.

Would have rated it higher but it needs editing, especially the punctuation. Also, the last bit about "The plan for next year is to complete the transformation medically." should have been left out. It is an unnecessary and jarring conclusion to the story. Up until then it seemed neither of them had a problem living as women who happened to have cocks. What happened? Are they both going to go under the knife or just one of them?

OH god - What a story

A beautiful story - much more please

Lovely!

Supremely well written, just enough to make you want to keep on until the climax! And from a crossdresser's viewpoint, congratulations on a fine effort, your talents are truly appreciated.

Suzie

Wonderfull!

It was reaaly wonderfull reading it. Gosh! Its 4 AM, i started at 1am, couldnt stop going through it fully.
Wish even I could find such a partner.

very beautiful and erotic

Simply lovely. I enjoy it more every time I read it. More please!

soap & hand lotion?

loved the story! but soap & hand lotion... ouch! i was getting all into the story, then a soapy finger? thanks, but no thanks. switch them to something else. not only would it be discomforting later, it's not lube and wouldn't last, and look at what's in those lotions and soaps, nothing i want to have up my backside, that's for sure. i agree with the other comments about the surgery, too abrupt and open-ended. xoxo

write more!

please write more!! i loved it!

just great

as someone who has cross dressed for years and have intimate with shemales, enjoyed very much what has been my dream: make a shemale my mistress and live with her but dressed as a woman, lesbians if you will

Di

gentle love

I love the kindness and realness of your stories. The lack of slutty behaviors is so refreshing, just gentle honesty rewarded with love and erotic tenderness. Thank you.

Really Good

I really liked this story. Really well written, no spitefullness, wonderful.

wonderful

Beautiful and sexy and loving!
Being a man, just as i would like to come out if only that were possible

Excellent story

This story was well written and very enjoyable, one of the best I have read. I would agree with others that the final remarks about presumably surgical changes (to one or both of them?) was probably not needed. Also there were a few typos which slipped through (and I know how difficult it can be to pick them up in your own work).

i hope to read more about yinz gals

Perfect

You realy cought my thoughts about wearing female clothing and how i would love to progress.
Its a shame that it is just in my head and not possable but i would like to read more.

what a exelent story

i wish i was michelle

Great story

Well paced, well written and very hot!

loved it!

hot hot hot! although the end was jarring, like others said, and kind of a let-down after such a fantastic story.

My Initiation

Hi
I am a mature bisexual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much. I would love to have a crossdresser for a roommate and lover.
Sincerely,
Josie of Augusta, Georgia

Much bigger

Great story. I would've like it more if Michelle would've been much bigger so I could've read about Steve crying and moaning as he took every inch in his virgin hole.

My Initiation

Great story I am in my 60s and have been dressing since my teens. I wish I could live the lifestyle all the time

loved it, excellent pace to the story and very hot!!

i can certainly relate to this story!

i was 15 the first time i tried on girl's clothes. I loved it and had a terrific orgasm from just wearing a girdle, nylons, and silky pink panties - without even playing with my "thingy"!! i'm in my 60s now, too, and wish i'd lived a life like this story describes!!

awesome

this is one of the finest stories ever

This story gets me hard and horny every time I read it!!! I am still in the closet but want my first experience to be like this!!!

This story is my dream

Being a muslim living in a very orthodox conservative society, I can just dream. But if I can, I will live like a woman openly like these guys, find a husband for myself. Currently I just dress myself secretly.

A Hetero View

As a straight practising heterosexual (if I practice enough, I might get it right), I found this story wonderful. It was well eritten and described a beautiful transformation. The sex was low key but compelling, and highlights what I strongly believe - if a story is well written, the content doesn't matter nearly so much. A favorite for me and worth more than 5 votes if that were possible.

A Perfect Story, Girlfriend!

You are an amazing writer! The sensitivity, the timing, the elegance of the story, are wonderful, so rarely seen on these websites. You must be a writer in real life as well? Or one who has read a great deal or been very well educated? What I liked most about the story was the way you showed Michelle's femininity without excessive laundry lists of clothing and makeup. You were never heavy handed, always delicate with the narration, and the dialogue was sweet and feminine. I had no trouble with the ending, but I understand why some were put off. Those who don't write a lot can't understand how difficult endings are, when you're tired of a story and want to move on! I saw your ending as that: A quick and sensible closing summary, like "and they lived happily ever after." Most of the interest and joy had already been given your readers in the earlier chapters, so why hang around when you can move to a new story? PLEASE DO SO? PLEASE WRITE MORE!