All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 01'

Looks like the start of an interesting series!

Extraordinarily well-written, with an astounding ability to switch between conversational and narrative styles without missing a beat. The events are sexy and erotic - and fresh with every page. Either the author has an incredible imagination or an amazingly enjoyable sex life! One tiny, tiny, tiny quibble: discrete and discreet are very different words

awesome beginning of a story, vastly underrated (probably because there is no real sex I would guess ?)

Good start