Extraordinarily well-written, with an astounding ability to switch between conversational and narrative styles without missing a beat. The events are sexy and erotic - and fresh with every page. Either the author has an incredible imagination or an amazingly enjoyable sex life! One tiny, tiny, tiny quibble: discrete and discreet are very different words
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Excellent start....
Looks like the start of an interesting series!
Feathered Cap
Extraordinarily well-written, with an astounding ability to switch between conversational and narrative styles without missing a beat. The events are sexy and erotic - and fresh with every page. Either the author has an incredible imagination or an amazingly enjoyable sex life! One tiny, tiny, tiny quibble: discrete and discreet are very different words
awesome beginning of a story, vastly underrated (probably because there is no real sex I would guess ?)
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