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A Creative Challenge Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/03/06

Really nice start .....

... here's hoping to see the rest!

regards
MS

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by hedoman01/03/06

Good story

I've really enjoyed Chapters 1 and 2 and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters. it's refreshing to find a story that relies on subtle sexuality instead of the extremely explicit.

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by Anonymous01/03/06

interesting

seems like it is going to be a cute story...very well done so far, hope to see more soon.

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