This just keeps getting better and better. Keep it up!
by
Anonymous01/06/06
very sexy, beautifully written
a great story--I hope it won't end too soon!
by
Anonymous01/06/06
a grown up story about caring
Shows two people building a relationship who seem to genuinely care for each other. The sex is the extra that makes the story work in different ways. An unexpected gem - and its not over yet!
English
Wow.
This just keeps getting better and better. Keep it up!
very sexy, beautifully written
a great story--I hope it won't end too soon!
a grown up story about caring
Shows two people building a relationship who seem to genuinely care for each other. The sex is the extra that makes the story work in different ways. An unexpected gem - and its not over yet!
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