All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 06'

....but this just keeps getting better and better!!

I've given you a '100' for all but Chaper One. Chapter Six promises sex in a crowded subway and I'll probably try givng a '120' since exhibitionism is best when there's strangers involved.

All in one go I've just read Chapters 1 to 6. Each one has got better. By that, I mean that this has been such a slow build up to something super. These stories are so well written that I can picture them having sex. Other readers will know that you read some stories that cut strait to the chase, you have a wank and then get on with your busy life. Guess what, I was planning on either going out if it stops raining or going on eBay, but guess what I'm going to continue reading these stories until I get to the last one. I'll leave some more comments at a later Chapter.

This series is amazing, especially ch's 5 and 6. Seriously, your stories are some of the best I have ever read, and trust me I have read many. Thank you so much for writing them :) The perfect fantasy scenario for an exhibitionist and a voyeur all rolled into one. It was very intimate and especially appreciative of a woman's most sacred place and the act of sharing that with the perfect voyeur. From the act of first touching a woman, to having her exposed in front of you, to fucking her, ahhh heavenly!! very beautiful and erotic descriptive writing.I can't wait to read more!

Your writing is like watching air freeze. Cold without content. You need some fire... not the promise of heat.

I am enjoying this story very much,it makes me laugh,and feel good....Thanks for the memories...algar1939