by Dumpington
your story reminds me of Little Red Riding Hood and her Grandma, but no beig bad wolf, in other words your story is missing the major build up and fails to have a punch line which would bring it over the top, it's o.k. to read it once, but I would not waste my time to read it a second time or recommend it to any one else, ocer all rating::MEDIOCER!!!!!
I think I shall try this at home...Boardwalk here I cum...hehehe
that was a good games of propertiy and as i was reading i was dreaming that hoe would look when u both were fucking each other i loved that prank the best
THis would make an excellent opening chapter for an ongoing serial. Pity it is only a one chapter story.
I have to agree with first anon ‘sugar and spice’. This is the fifth story of yours ive read and they all pan out the same way. Different in this story that the closet lesbian cheated in the game, then resorted to binding and gagging the other to get what she wants. Very worthy of a male raping woman story, and the victim falls hopelessly in love with her rapist.
Please come ip with more varied and less predatory story lines