your story reminds me of Little Red Riding Hood and her Grandma, but no beig bad wolf, in other words your story is missing the major build up and fails to have a punch line which would bring it over the top, it's o.k. to read it once, but I would not waste my time to read it a second time or recommend it to any one else, ocer all rating::MEDIOCER!!!!!
I think I shall try this at home...Boardwalk here I cum...hehehe
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Anonymous07/09/09
fucking lovely girls
that was a good games of propertiy and as i was reading i was dreaming that hoe would look when u both were fucking each other i loved that prank the best
English
nice, but no sugar and no spice
your story reminds me of Little Red Riding Hood and her Grandma, but no beig bad wolf, in other words your story is missing the major build up and fails to have a punch line which would bring it over the top, it's o.k. to read it once, but I would not waste my time to read it a second time or recommend it to any one else, ocer all rating::MEDIOCER!!!!!
Pure fun!
I think I shall try this at home...Boardwalk here I cum...hehehe
fucking lovely girls
that was a good games of propertiy and as i was reading i was dreaming that hoe would look when u both were fucking each other i loved that prank the best
GREAT OPENER
THis would make an excellent opening chapter for an ongoing serial. Pity it is only a one chapter story.
Loved reading this
Well written and a fun, erotic read...thank you
love it!
Lovely, please continue this to see where it goes!
Thank you!
L
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