All Comments on 'The Monopoly Game'

by Dumpington

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
nice, but no sugar and no spice

your story reminds me of Little Red Riding Hood and her Grandma, but no beig bad wolf, in other words your story is missing the major build up and fails to have a punch line which would bring it over the top, it's o.k. to read it once, but I would not waste my time to read it a second time or recommend it to any one else, ocer all rating::MEDIOCER!!!!!

peacfulezfeelngpeacfulezfeelngabout 15 years ago
Pure fun!

I think I shall try this at home...Boardwalk here I cum...hehehe

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
fucking lovely girls

that was a good games of propertiy and as i was reading i was dreaming that hoe would look when u both were fucking each other i loved that prank the best

DryhillDryhillover 13 years ago
GREAT OPENER

THis would make an excellent opening chapter for an ongoing serial. Pity it is only a one chapter story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved reading this

Well written and a fun, erotic read...thank you

LcnmdLcnmdalmost 9 years ago
love it!

Lovely, please continue this to see where it goes!

Thank you!

L

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Your stories all read so predictably

I have to agree with first anon ‘sugar and spice’. This is the fifth story of yours ive read and they all pan out the same way. Different in this story that the closet lesbian cheated in the game, then resorted to binding and gagging the other to get what she wants. Very worthy of a male raping woman story, and the victim falls hopelessly in love with her rapist.

Please come ip with more varied and less predatory story lines

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It's been done.

Furthermore, not all stories have to be bdsm.

Anonymous
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