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Yes!
Admittedly, the story was off to a bit of a slow start but now I am spellbound to the page! Please continue, I absolutely adore this chapter and it gave me goosebumps. I'm sure I'll start having my own fantasies about Vic and Lex now. :)
fantastic
but please continue and soon...waiting for a new chapter is getting very difficult.
years, months, weeks, and days
The fact that Lex knows exactly how long it's been since they last saw each other makes me root for him.
Keep up the good work.
FINiSH PLEAsE!
oh just finish this one first! its getting better and better. i'm not sure who i like more, just please, continue this one. don't let it be another month before the next submission.
Excellent improvement...
... your writing is clearly improving as you continue to weave more tales. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next installment. If you need any sort of assistance finding the right English word, I offer my services. always, simc
i really .........
hope you finish and continue on with this story as quickly as possible with the same wonderful talent you've given it and brought with it to life. Thank you and do hurry...i've waited as have others for such a long time for this story to continue...it loses a fans interest in waiting so long and then...all of a sudden there is another chapter and the fan is excited to see their favorite back in print...don't make us wait to long dear writer. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
I love you!
I'm so happy to see that there are so many that are enjoying my stories! Although I have welcomed you to criticise me I haven't received a single 'bad' criticism. (Bad all through). And I must say that every word you're saying to me makes me so happy!
I've noticed that some are very eager for me to finish this fast. I'm going to have to disappoint you, so sorry but that's the way it is. Since I posted this last chapter I have barely written anything on next - of course I know what it's about etc.etc. it's just that the holidays have taken so much of me, and as I said before I've started a new story. I don't think it will last, but it's still nagging in the back of my head. I truly hope that my beloved readers will endure my 'break' so to say. (I do hope that the next chapter will be done in a couple of days, and then you'll just have to wait a week.)
Hugs and kisses to all of you!
Jane Shield
My literotica account is so screwed up that I'm about to cry... No, not really, I never liked Literotica much anyway. I've forgotten to do this but... Now I'm doing it.
Literotica is fucked up, so you who are looking for my stories will have to read them at some other place, like SOL (storiesonline.net) or AFF (adultfanfiction.net - in the original part, or just search for my name - which is the same there as on lit... nothing compares to being consistent)
And oh by the way, I've gotten a new blog - much better - and a new mail as well: Jane.shield@hotmail.com
Anyone who'd like to add me at MSN is welcome to do so. I'm so lonely :s.... No, not really. Perhaps, a bit... teeny tad.
This was Jane Shield, over and out!
Still loving the story
Don't apologize for not being able to translate certain things. I think your English is because it is enriched by your Swedish. When you struggle to translate something I think that is perhaps when you are saying something quite unique.
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