All Comments on 'Riding Lessons'

by victoria84

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Disgusting/Shitty Plot

Too short for a decent grading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Missing something

Not that great of a plot or writing style. Sounds like a sexually inexperienced kid wrote it.

StuckInMyCornerStuckInMyCornerover 18 years ago
I feel robbed...

I expected a lot more from you. Your previous stories were more decent than this. What happened?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
is that all there is ??

great setting and story but it is too bad it is so short.

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