It was an ok story, butGood but could have been better. He should still get some revenge, i mean hell if he is not a ncie guy, make her suffer, at least take her ass or he should have had his way with her and then left her.
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01/04/06
It's hard to see why he would
want to stay with her.
Since it doesn't mean anything, he should just add another notch on his belt and move on!
Everyone has a right to their opinion -- but why would he want to get revenge? He is obviously attracted to this woman, wanted her, and hated it when she slept with someone else. But since they weren't boyfriend/girlfriend, why the hell would he be thinking "revenge". He was a smart guy, figured out that maybe a little alpha male might score him some points, and guess what? It did!
Her breasts bounced up and down, being held in his palms as her body thrust back and forward. She could feel his breath on her ear.
"This is how you like it, isn't it?" he whispered softly in her ear.
Loved this part! Him both thrusting in her, yet also holding her. I love that imagery. And the whispering/talking into her ear while he's fucking her - hawt!Off to read some more ;)
why is he even face to face with this bitch. any woman doing what she did would not even get a call or any chance to talk again.
What a bitch, making out with her lover but not fucking but fucking an old guy.
Kick her ass to the curb, otherwise she will be treating you like shit the rest of any life you have together.
English
good but could have been better
It was an ok story, butGood but could have been better. He should still get some revenge, i mean hell if he is not a ncie guy, make her suffer, at least take her ass or he should have had his way with her and then left her.
It's hard to see why he would
want to stay with her.
Since it doesn't mean anything, he should just add another notch on his belt and move on!
More than a little truth
There's a kernel of truth in this story that every "nice guy" can relate to.
I liked it very much
Everyone has a right to their opinion -- but why would he want to get revenge? He is obviously attracted to this woman, wanted her, and hated it when she slept with someone else. But since they weren't boyfriend/girlfriend, why the hell would he be thinking "revenge". He was a smart guy, figured out that maybe a little alpha male might score him some points, and guess what? It did!
Her breasts bounced up and down, being held in his palms as her body thrust back and forward. She could feel his breath on her ear.
"This is how you like it, isn't it?" he whispered softly in her ear.
Loved this part! Him both thrusting in her, yet also holding her. I love that imagery. And the whispering/talking into her ear while he's fucking her - hawt!Off to read some more ;)
why is he even talking to this bitch.
why is he even face to face with this bitch. any woman doing what she did would not even get a call or any chance to talk again.
What a bitch, making out with her lover but not fucking but fucking an old guy.
Kick her ass to the curb, otherwise she will be treating you like shit the rest of any life you have together.
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