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Poetry Reading Blues

byBill Dada©
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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/31/05

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But was it the booze
Or the poetry
That done him in?

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by My Erotic Trail12/31/05

mentioned

this poem was mentioned in the NEW POEMS REVIEWS...

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by vampiredust01/01/06

A curious

little write. I liked the second stanza, quite a suggestive image. I think you should consider rewriting the first stanza, it didn't read very well compared to the other two.

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U01/10/06

reviews

there ya go...you made it to the new poem reviews...
good job BD
**HUGS**
T

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by jgywnn01/16/06

Strong

Strong imagry. Well presented.

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