Really enjoyed your story. Well paced and with a well handled increasing plot. The end is particularly good...
Minor (minor) notes: there could have been a bit more emphasis around the size (big) of her shaft, but anyway I really loved it!
Congrat's and Thanks!
More on this trend yeaaaah! :-P
Strap-On : Yeaaaah!
Really enjoyed your story. Well paced and with a well handled increasing plot. The end is particularly good...
Minor (minor) notes: there could have been a bit more emphasis around the size (big) of her shaft, but anyway I really loved it!
Congrat's and Thanks!
More on this trend yeaaaah! :-P
Your story
What and erotic scene - I loed the story - more please
Superb!
Truly lovely story of love and possession! I really enjoyed reading it!.
one bit though, I know it would be a bit more painful initially more description in his submission to your taking of him =)
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