r a very talented writer. Most of your stories I dislike but this is not one of those.
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Anonymous01/05/06
Good a man with balls
Thank you it's getting hard to read a good story on here lately. Where do these writer think that men enjoy reading about wifes screwing around and it's OK. Good Story and THANK YOU again, Do more PLEASE............
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01/05/06
Well, you gotta pay to play!
She played... she paid!
Nice job. The man lost his wife but kept his pride.
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Anonymous01/05/06
Superb
A couple of months ago I was annoyed at one of your stories. However, I wasn't allowed to criticize it with a comment because you weren't taking public comments then.
A couple of weeks after that I really discovered you as an author. Now I must read every Just Plain Bob story. The plots, the ingenuity,the whole raunchy & earthy tone of the stories----the tops. Very little whining, weeping & gnashing of teeth. These stories for what they are are good. How you keep coming up with fresh twists is amazing.
Hell, maybe I'm schizo. Two-thirds of your stories are about an extremely small percentage of men who would love their wives even if they were watching them get gang-banged by rancid homeless guys while listening to her verbally bashing her husband. Then the husbands would go and clean their wives up with their tongue and then fuck them.
And then the other third of your stories deal with how a regular guy would deal with his wife's infidelities. Even though the husband loves the wife, he is not going to put up with her betrayal. As painful as it is, he reacts as I think a huge majority of men would act when confronted with infidelity.
The question is though; which of these two scenarios is the greatest fantasy to you the author? The wimpy husband who sucks cum from his wife or the husband that doesn't believe his wife should be fucking around on him?
I wonder which stories get the highest scores?
A good fantasy story, but I still don't believe in this crap about one's wife cannot fuck another guy if she wants to and still stay married to her husband. And this story could have had a little bit about those guys fucking her in that chain event and possibly knocking her up--you did not say anything about her possibly being on birth control....maybe when they decided to not have children, her husband had been "fixed"? I was going to give you a grade of '100' but I changed it....it would have been a '100' except for the hole in the story about possible pregnancy of her.
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Anonymous01/05/06
The Good One third
I agree with Sherlock about a few things. The two thirds of your stories that deal with husbands that put up with anything from their wives don't interest me. But the other one third you write, I love. So I always have to check them out, just in case. And at least you have some handgun knowledge, or researched it. Might I suggest a bull barreled Browning Buckmark for the job he did in the office, you shoot it, you'll love it ;-)
Thanks for the story.
CB
This is great. No frivolous groveling. I enjoyed his and your accuracy.
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Anonymous01/05/06
Great Job Author
Doesn't it piss you off writer when men tolerate a wife whore or schedule thier wifes' other bigger cocks to watch.
Don't you agree writer that husbands who tolerate or encourage their own male humiliation to watch bigger cocks are poor pitiful subhuman sicko's. A wife whore as bait is so respectfully short term.
Wouldn't you agree that anyone who would write that dismal below human convention fetish type self cuckolding himself crap is more than a little sick themselves.
I am so happy that you write to real life with talent and imagination for the 99% of us semi-normal readers rather than the 1% who need pitiful humiliation and subhuman sick cuckster writers to get their jaded finger held appendage up and off.
Now this is not to say that they don't have the right to be sick and abnormally freakie all the time but wheres' the future for these pathetic jaded sick one's. Then it takes a bit more sad pathetic crap to get it up each time - then what - get the wife to actually do it so they can watch - golly now they can really experiance the eventual demise of their life and family.
Thank god you know this writer - so these absurdly pathetic men(?) know they must go elsewhere - to the fetish dept. for their freakie rides.
Thanks Bobie - more in this theme please where your talents can be appreciated by the semi-normal masses! -- with Regard
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Anonymous01/05/06
that what i'm talking about
thank for showing what a real life person would act like if wife fuck over them.
I don't always like your stories, Bob, but this one is GREAT! Well written, concise, and a great story. Really appreciate a husband with some balls - big brass ones.
This is so over-the-top I have to believe it's satirical. As such it was nasty fun. Would have liked a few more details about the four days with Greg's hot wife :-). Best, Ken
How do you write so MANY consistently great stories? I don't know, but please keep it up!
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Anonymous01/06/06
Very Good
At first, I was hoping he would shoot his wife's fucker in the balls. However, that scenario was already done by HDK. I then wished he had shot the asshole in the asshole with a pellet gun so as not to kill him. However, your method of revenge was very good and the husband probably derived some satisfaction from it. All's well that ends well.
Great title! Grand story!
I don’t enjoy all your stories, that just my personal preferences but I almost always appreciate your writing.
I don’t know how you can be so prolific and still write so well.
Looking forward to what ever is next from that wonderful sick twisted creative mind.
Thanks for the stories.
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Anonymous01/06/06
A REAL MAN
IM GLAD TO SEE AN AUTHER THAT UNDERSTANDS A REAL MAN. ALL THOSE OTHER SICKO AUTHERS AN LEARN FROM YOU. I WOULD HAVE ENJOYED THE STOREY EVEM MORE IF HE HAD USED THE.45
A good tale. An affair of 3 1/2 years? That's about 4-5 days too long to put up with, to overlook. Screwing him six times a week and her lover, too? She could make a fortune as a call girl/
He and Myra like to fuck---is that enough?
I loved it because he refused to be a cuckold wimp. JPB you can write with power. The problem is that your favorite themes are too dark for most of us.
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Anonymous03/29/09
Well written...but then we all know that Bob didn'
write it. I did nad Bob has me write a few of his stories because he is such a wimp that he can only stories with wimp husbands in them. Just like he was when he was married. He would siuck his wife's lover's cocks for them and then he would put them in her...Why??? Oh I thought you knew that BOB has a little one inch cock that never even gets hard. BOB's wife used to go to the homeless shelters to find fuck partners. She got AIDS that way and eventually gave it to BOB. She takes AZT and STEROIDS to live longer and she is a prostitute for men and women with AIDS. What ??? you say that you didn't know that his wife ate pussy...hell yes but she has to be ninety years old. She get's that from when she and BOB would eat his great grandmothers cunt. It was so large from her days in the circus and her times with an elephant. BOB and hid slut wife could even get their heads in her cunt at the same time and lick the puss from it.
One can never fault brilliant story,I am sorry though that to me you have just set the stage for a mind blowing tale of intrigue,betrayal,revenge...and I hope remorse and healing.
I wouldn't write off reconciliation,but not by way of ending up with a wimp and cuckold nor submissive whore willing to be farmed out....only the emergence of two strong focused individuals will pay tribute to the scene you have just set.
I can't imagine that nobody called the cops after the gunshots, even just a 22, but what the hell, it's just a story :-) I usually find the revenge stories to be rather overdone, but I enjoyed this one.
But first you get the divorce going and the monies nailed down THEN you get revenge. Now he my have to pay spousal support.
Don't know why but I found this kind of funny. Like JPB was trying to pull a quick one on us. It was light, quick and predicable but also very good. Luck he did not get charged with Discharging a Firearm.
I wonder if Kathleen will have him arrested for attempted murder? A lot of people saw him take a number of shots at Greg. Jail time would probably be a given. And then he spent 4 days with Greg's wife, so his claims for adultery are out the door. And even if he doesn't go to jail he's still going to be splitting up the assets 50/50 (if he's lucky) and paying alimony (his wife is unemployed). Seems to me like he didn't get revenge - he just got screwed!
He didn't make her pull the train, he merely pointed her out to a bunch of guys. She could have walk away, or if they forced her, she could have cried rape. That was a weird weak link in this story. Are there really women that are this stupid and this selfish and actually hold decent jobs that allow them to live a middle class lifestyle? I have come across a few stupid, selfish, psycho sluts in my time, but they were total fuck ups in every way including in their employment and in their friendships or lack of real friends. The appropriate setting for most of these stories is a low rent trailer park, sleazy apartment building or anywhere where people who are not productive live.
"Why did you do that to her? She loves you and you show your love for her by doing that to her? You are not the nice guy that she tells everyone that you are."
“Marcia gave me a dirty look and then she turned and stalked away.”
“She looked up at me with tears running down her cheeks and said, ‘You bastard! How could you? I thought you loved me.’"
HE’S the bad guy because he won’t stand for her cuckolding him?!
English
You
r a very talented writer. Most of your stories I dislike but this is not one of those.
Good a man with balls
Thank you it's getting hard to read a good story on here lately. Where do these writer think that men enjoy reading about wifes screwing around and it's OK. Good Story and THANK YOU again, Do more PLEASE............
Well, you gotta pay to play!
She played... she paid!
Nice job. The man lost his wife but kept his pride.
Superb
A couple of months ago I was annoyed at one of your stories. However, I wasn't allowed to criticize it with a comment because you weren't taking public comments then.
A couple of weeks after that I really discovered you as an author. Now I must read every Just Plain Bob story. The plots, the ingenuity,the whole raunchy & earthy tone of the stories----the tops. Very little whining, weeping & gnashing of teeth. These stories for what they are are good. How you keep coming up with fresh twists is amazing.
playingcardcompany
Bingo
Nicely done. My idea of fitting retribution. Too severe? I think not, I suspect she enjoyed it.
Good show
I would have thought she would have been very popular at work after that.
It kinda looks like she really underestimated her husband.
3 1/2 years? Looks like he shoulda been to more company parties.
Classic
Good thing he was a practiced marksman with more than a modicom of restraint.
Great story with enough "tongue in cheek" humor.
I just don't know JPB. Maybe your schizo.
Hell, maybe I'm schizo. Two-thirds of your stories are about an extremely small percentage of men who would love their wives even if they were watching them get gang-banged by rancid homeless guys while listening to her verbally bashing her husband. Then the husbands would go and clean their wives up with their tongue and then fuck them.
And then the other third of your stories deal with how a regular guy would deal with his wife's infidelities. Even though the husband loves the wife, he is not going to put up with her betrayal. As painful as it is, he reacts as I think a huge majority of men would act when confronted with infidelity.
The question is though; which of these two scenarios is the greatest fantasy to you the author? The wimpy husband who sucks cum from his wife or the husband that doesn't believe his wife should be fucking around on him?
I wonder which stories get the highest scores?
Some women think this way
My ex thought it was ok to be like this....but I didn't find out for sure till a few months before she left me.
Breeding time?
A good fantasy story, but I still don't believe in this crap about one's wife cannot fuck another guy if she wants to and still stay married to her husband. And this story could have had a little bit about those guys fucking her in that chain event and possibly knocking her up--you did not say anything about her possibly being on birth control....maybe when they decided to not have children, her husband had been "fixed"? I was going to give you a grade of '100' but I changed it....it would have been a '100' except for the hole in the story about possible pregnancy of her.
The Good One third
I agree with Sherlock about a few things. The two thirds of your stories that deal with husbands that put up with anything from their wives don't interest me. But the other one third you write, I love. So I always have to check them out, just in case. And at least you have some handgun knowledge, or researched it. Might I suggest a bull barreled Browning Buckmark for the job he did in the office, you shoot it, you'll love it ;-)
Thanks for the story.
CB
Good one!
Classic 'Just Plain Bob'
nuff said
This is Great
This is great. No frivolous groveling. I enjoyed his and your accuracy.
Great Job Author
Doesn't it piss you off writer when men tolerate a wife whore or schedule thier wifes' other bigger cocks to watch.
Don't you agree writer that husbands who tolerate or encourage their own male humiliation to watch bigger cocks are poor pitiful subhuman sicko's. A wife whore as bait is so respectfully short term.
Wouldn't you agree that anyone who would write that dismal below human convention fetish type self cuckolding himself crap is more than a little sick themselves.
I am so happy that you write to real life with talent and imagination for the 99% of us semi-normal readers rather than the 1% who need pitiful humiliation and subhuman sick cuckster writers to get their jaded finger held appendage up and off.
Now this is not to say that they don't have the right to be sick and abnormally freakie all the time but wheres' the future for these pathetic jaded sick one's. Then it takes a bit more sad pathetic crap to get it up each time - then what - get the wife to actually do it so they can watch - golly now they can really experiance the eventual demise of their life and family.
Thank god you know this writer - so these absurdly pathetic men(?) know they must go elsewhere - to the fetish dept. for their freakie rides.
Thanks Bobie - more in this theme please where your talents can be appreciated by the semi-normal masses! -- with Regard
that what i'm talking about
thank for showing what a real life person would act like if wife fuck over them.
Excellent little story!
I don't always like your stories, Bob, but this one is GREAT! Well written, concise, and a great story. Really appreciate a husband with some balls - big brass ones.
So intolerant
So sad. The highly misunderstood serial persistant drunken indesction syndrome kills another marriage.
Excellent Story
Concise writing and good character development (You realy get a sense of the husband and the wife).
Thanks for the outstanding story!
SleeplessinMD
Good nasty fun
This is so over-the-top I have to believe it's satirical. As such it was nasty fun. Would have liked a few more details about the four days with Greg's hot wife :-). Best, Ken
Outstanding as Always....
How do you write so MANY consistently great stories? I don't know, but please keep it up!
Very Good
At first, I was hoping he would shoot his wife's fucker in the balls. However, that scenario was already done by HDK. I then wished he had shot the asshole in the asshole with a pellet gun so as not to kill him. However, your method of revenge was very good and the husband probably derived some satisfaction from it. All's well that ends well.
Boyd
Good fun!
Great title! Grand story!
I don’t enjoy all your stories, that just my personal preferences but I almost always appreciate your writing.
I don’t know how you can be so prolific and still write so well.
Looking forward to what ever is next from that wonderful sick twisted creative mind.
Thanks for the stories.
A REAL MAN
IM GLAD TO SEE AN AUTHER THAT UNDERSTANDS A REAL MAN. ALL THOSE OTHER SICKO AUTHERS AN LEARN FROM YOU. I WOULD HAVE ENJOYED THE STOREY EVEM MORE IF HE HAD USED THE.45
Surprise twist
I thought this would be your stand "cuckold" story, but it wasn't. Didn't turn me own much, but from a literary point of view good. Keep writing.
Great story!!!
F**kin' great story!
That is why I like to read JPB
you really don't have a fucking clue how it is going to end. I have to agree that variety can be fun!
Cheers!
Nothing subtle here
Nothing but a classic Just Plain Bob plot.
A good ending
A good tale. An affair of 3 1/2 years? That's about 4-5 days too long to put up with, to overlook. Screwing him six times a week and her lover, too? She could make a fortune as a call girl/
He and Myra like to fuck---is that enough?
Wow
You ARE capable of being a real man! Heheh, very entertaining. See? All you have to do to get high marks is to earn them...
Well written
I loved it because he refused to be a cuckold wimp. JPB you can write with power. The problem is that your favorite themes are too dark for most of us.
Well written...but then we all know that Bob didn'
write it. I did nad Bob has me write a few of his stories because he is such a wimp that he can only stories with wimp husbands in them. Just like he was when he was married. He would siuck his wife's lover's cocks for them and then he would put them in her...Why??? Oh I thought you knew that BOB has a little one inch cock that never even gets hard. BOB's wife used to go to the homeless shelters to find fuck partners. She got AIDS that way and eventually gave it to BOB. She takes AZT and STEROIDS to live longer and she is a prostitute for men and women with AIDS. What ??? you say that you didn't know that his wife ate pussy...hell yes but she has to be ninety years old. She get's that from when she and BOB would eat his great grandmothers cunt. It was so large from her days in the circus and her times with an elephant. BOB and hid slut wife could even get their heads in her cunt at the same time and lick the puss from it.
Good Story
Woman got what was cumming to her.
Cheater got nailed!!
I liked this story,.and it was well writen. A very good read. R.T.
COME BACKS ARE A BITCH
One can never fault brilliant story,I am sorry though that to me you have just set the stage for a mind blowing tale of intrigue,betrayal,revenge...and I hope remorse and healing.
I wouldn't write off reconciliation,but not by way of ending up with a wimp and cuckold nor submissive whore willing to be farmed out....only the emergence of two strong focused individuals will pay tribute to the scene you have just set.
I gave it 3*** because:
It is not realistic. You could not get a group of middle class guy to gang fuck a man's wife if you hand picked them.
Good Read BOB!!!!!!
I do not know how I missed this one. Thanks for the good read.
Not Bad
I can't imagine that nobody called the cops after the gunshots, even just a 22, but what the hell, it's just a story :-) I usually find the revenge stories to be rather overdone, but I enjoyed this one.
This was underdone.
Usually revenge stories are overderdone as someone commented in this story. Problem was this one was underdone
This one
Was perfect! 5
Just Right
Thanks Bob, all bases covered, short, sweet, to the point and done!!!
EXCELLENT
That's how you treat a cheating skank slut whore cunt twat wife.
Way to go Bob.
56,017,844 STARS
Sorry to disagree
But first you get the divorce going and the monies nailed down THEN you get revenge. Now he my have to pay spousal support.
Don't know why but I found this kind of funny. Like JPB was trying to pull a quick one on us. It was light, quick and predicable but also very good. Luck he did not get charged with Discharging a Firearm.
Enjoyed it
Not your strongest, but a fun read.
He only made a FEW mistakes.
I wonder if Kathleen will have him arrested for attempted murder? A lot of people saw him take a number of shots at Greg. Jail time would probably be a given. And then he spent 4 days with Greg's wife, so his claims for adultery are out the door. And even if he doesn't go to jail he's still going to be splitting up the assets 50/50 (if he's lucky) and paying alimony (his wife is unemployed). Seems to me like he didn't get revenge - he just got screwed!
Here's a quarter...
...find someone who cares.
nice
ditto: here's a quarter...
DEPENDING ON THE GAME
a miss is as good as a mile of torture. TK U MLJ LV NV
pulling a train?
He didn't make her pull the train, he merely pointed her out to a bunch of guys. She could have walk away, or if they forced her, she could have cried rape. That was a weird weak link in this story. Are there really women that are this stupid and this selfish and actually hold decent jobs that allow them to live a middle class lifestyle? I have come across a few stupid, selfish, psycho sluts in my time, but they were total fuck ups in every way including in their employment and in their friendships or lack of real friends. The appropriate setting for most of these stories is a low rent trailer park, sleazy apartment building or anywhere where people who are not productive live.
*****
I was hoping for a few more missed shots.
LMAO!!!!
Huh?
"Why did you do that to her? She loves you and you show your love for her by doing that to her? You are not the nice guy that she tells everyone that you are."
“Marcia gave me a dirty look and then she turned and stalked away.”
“She looked up at me with tears running down her cheeks and said, ‘You bastard! How could you? I thought you loved me.’"
HE’S the bad guy because he won’t stand for her cuckolding him?!
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