All Comments on 'Donal' Ch. 02'

I'm now awaiting the next installment in the Donal' sage with baited breath. *shakes fist at kendo* Hurry up, you!

Well woven tale leaving the reader anxiously waiting for the next part. Erotic and mysterious.

one I can read till you write more...

Sweet, simple, and alluring. This was more laid back then the first, but it should be. It was still as gripping as before, but for me in a different way, more of an acceptance that you're going to keep us waiting for a long time.

*sighs and shakes head* Stubborn man...

Suspense is a welcoming thing to a story. Thank you for weaving it into this work. I'm off to 3.

~ Red ~

still here. That says a lot actually. On to three.

Being a genuine Scotswoman, your attempt at a brogue is annoying. It would be better to have it correct or not at all. It does not fit the time frame you are looking for.

I am a woman of few words ..more