by LuciousBi-Writes4U
A great idea for a story, but it is lacking sorely in the details. A few rewrights and this could be a very kick ass story, and possibly the beginings of a small series.
loved the cute little rhymes and the way you brought it full circle to each sisters most famous traits...big charmed fan and I say great job!
cute funny not toooo graphic just enough!
not everything is meant to be a series either...sometimes it's just one cute, funny, sexy, little piece!
over all,
A JOB WELL DONE!!
LOVED IT! ;)
good...a little sex and a lot of fun a great mix of word play and added things only a fan would know about the characters! :)
So a demon put a spell on them, seems when you lose you win.
ty,bd
I doubt this would give a woody to the most hard up 15 year old virgin boy in America. Tons of misspellings, tepid third-person action, what was the point?
Check it out:
http://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=941770619
It was so stupid no real offense just my thought. What kind of spell is that, no good at all, just lame.