Shutter Click

wonderful

Lovey, that was awesome!!! An honor to have it dedicated to me. Mwah!

Hot!

Although a little outside of my usual arena, Tom, this is a thoroughly entertaining and enjoyable read. Well executed and evocative. Nice job of storytelling.

Hugo

Nice job

It's good to see a little talent come around. *wink*

Good work.

Nicely done, Tom.
Like Hugo, it's outside my usual read.
Good story, believable.
Keep it up!

RAWR. Haha.

Manohman, sweetheart. I love this story any way you can pump it out. You don't need to beat me up and steal my lines, you can pay for it in trade. ::Wiggles eyebrows:: And ah yes, those paper thin walls. Too bad my roomate's home or I'd be pumping something else out about now.

You *NEED* to write more stories. I shit you not, you have to sate your obsessive fan base now. We might become frustrated and start throwing our used underwear at you.

...waitaminute, I wonder if that would work for me too??

Wow...

This was excellent. It even makes a straight girl (well... I think I'm straight... I'm still working on that decision...;)) anywho... Tom, it is an excellent read. I enjoyed it.

What I liked was it didn't come across as disgusting, or gross, or wrong... like some people believe the lifestyle is. I found it to be well written with just the right amount of description to give the reader an idea of what was happening.

And OMG! The camera scene... amazing. Kudos to your editor... I am glad you stuck with using the name Ed through the story. There was one time you went from Edgar to Edward, early in the beginning, but by going with Ed it was easy to forget the oops.

Keep it up... (pun intended)

~Red~

Yum!

Great story, sweetie - and very hot action. :)

Amazing is right

Shutter click; I just came! damn that build up was hot, Tom!

Awesome

This is such a good story. Not only is it incredibly hot (I came twice! ^^;;), but it's extremely well written, too.

The whole last part was amazing...shutter, click. That's a really awesome effect.

amazing

Oh this was so hot i am steaming here. You really need to write more or am i being greedy!!
Thankyou so much for sharing your gift

More

More please. Eliot just got there, tons of fun still to be had.

OK... totally hawt enough between Stef, Phin and Ed but when Eliot walked in, dayum! No work done indeed. Think of the foursome possibilites.