Another fine write
Prompting a rush
To the dictionary;
Envisioning groups pontificating
As they dissect words you wrote ~
Canting - I like that one.
There are some lovely images here but I feel its spoilt by the wordiness of it all. Is it really neccessary to use a million and one OTT adjectives?
Your poem is mentioned in the new poems review thread.
I enjoyed your poem blue. 'Bubble gum for the mind"
Very nice, very mysterious.
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