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I'm Cleaning the Garage

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/04/06

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Very nice
Moving on and starting fresh
Cleaned and ready;
And BTW, Welcome back to Lit
After a long absence.

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by TheRainMan01/05/06

There is something very nice here.

Enjoyable reading.

I agree with today's reviewer that this needs to be edited and tightened up to heighten its punch by making it less redundant.

Nice concept and poem.

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