All Comments on 'Waiting to Exhale'

by halfmoonfrenzy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Breathless

Beautifully told. A nice talent for spacing and pause. Good Style and sweet excitment. Thanks halfmoonfrenzy for it is a joy to read.

MarieCostelloMarieCostelloover 16 years ago
Written with maturity

I really enjoyed reading this. It is a well-written piece with an almost poetic feeling to it. Thank you for your positive comment on my first submission; it has really helped me to feel more confident about writing more!

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