by My Erotic Trail
A nice different view
Of a tree's dance;
Where have we heard that before <grinning>.
Nice touch with that acorn
Bringing the tale full circle.
BTW - that should read dying.
a tighly woven tale riding upon the trails of the dance...nice/blue
good choice to leave the lines short, it gave the effect of being tossed by the wind, very loose and flowing. I like the idea of the sun being pushed aside. nice write!
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I read them all and i get more impressed with every one i read...wow,awesome