every installment of this story. You write very well, and I'm growing fond of both characters. I look forward to more. Thanks for writing! ohio
well written and not too fast paced...
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I've enjoyed
every installment of this story. You write very well, and I'm growing fond of both characters.
I look forward to more. Thanks for writing!
ohio
well done!
well written and not too fast paced...
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