All Comments on 'Debris On A Cresent's Trail'

I just love an intelligent write

That demands thinking of its reader;

Sends my mind reeling in myriad directions...

...the background story, this is nothing short of astounding. Sargodha, Indus, Eden, Cresent... no wonder you haven't written in a while. I genflect in your general direction, girl. :)

/M

The first couple of lines are a wonderful beginning. The entire poem is good, even staggering souls--mention of souls doesn't turn out the best in most poems.

I have read your work...strong title and it fits the poem so well..discriptive images are haunting and colorful...nicely done...bluerains

The story is engaging and the images are enthralling. I was puzzled by some of the line breaks, but enjoyed this very much.

Fly

Belated score

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