All Comments on '"She" is Me'

That was amazing.

I wish I could write words like that.

Thank you for letting me read it.

A rare gift of deep feeling

Expressed in these phrases

While love is experienced unknowingly.

Terrible yearnings that never quite get satisfied. He still wants her desperately - though possession is never achieved.

with deep yearnings for what he/she hasn't had. (yet) Nice work.

I love this poem its really good and makes me want to go grab my girlfriend and bang her real good till she understands how its like to be away from her.