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All Comments on 'Oh to be so lucky!'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Very nice

A different style

And I like that last line...

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
forever...

is equal to the space between two dimes... lucky would be living in that time with joy of the heart. nice write...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A poem to dwell on

DC:

You're right. A much different style. I like it but it is one you have to think about. Thank You. Ronnie W.

MrFantasyManMrFantasyManover 18 years ago
Lucky...

This is certainly different for you Red...your style has no boundrary...and I am always pleased to see you growing...

f-cynyrf-cynyrover 18 years ago
nice narrative

and i particularly liked the line "hovering on the edge". that line capture the moment extremely well.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
IN OUR ESSENCE

lies nirvana. TK U MLJ LV NV

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