All Comments on 'ALONE AT 2am'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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What truly saves this from being just another average poem are those last two lines,

"For 'I' is all that I desire

The pain too great in 'we'"

Now we're looking at a really good piece.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
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I want aloneness ~ to be my natural state.

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