All Comments on 'Creation'

by Ygraine

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Pain, poison and passion.

I wanted to be one of them - I didn't care which one - I just wanted to be in that story.

Thank you.

Truly erotic writing that engages the imagination is hard to find, even on Lit.

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
!

A bit different from what I usually read of yours, Ygraine, but very good none the less! Keep writing!

Boo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Loved it

Well written and thought provoking.

VampireKingVampireKingabout 18 years ago
A sweet glass of venom

A truly magical piece of erotica. Ygraine is the queen of dark sensuality and commands our awe and delight with her tales.

ArogueArogueabout 18 years ago
A new direction

We discussed venom the other night. This lends a whole new direction to vampiric fiction.

I though it outstanding.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Transformation

More please !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Creamy milk

I long to taste her creamy milk ygraine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Damn good

Pretty good, loved how you concentrated on sensation rather than action.

StressingAsianStressingAsianalmost 17 years ago
A bit esoteric...

but really good. Unlike a lot of vampire stories which use vampirism as a springboard for sex, this stays focussed on the vampires and the purest forms of eroticism (control, supplication, the total mingling of two souls...all that poetic shtuff). If you're not into it, you're not into it. But if you are, or can appreciate it, then it is a wonderful little bite sized piece. (Get it, bit? haha)

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