by Ygraine
I wanted to be one of them - I didn't care which one - I just wanted to be in that story.
Thank you.
Truly erotic writing that engages the imagination is hard to find, even on Lit.
Keep writing.
A bit different from what I usually read of yours, Ygraine, but very good none the less! Keep writing!
Boo
A truly magical piece of erotica. Ygraine is the queen of dark sensuality and commands our awe and delight with her tales.
We discussed venom the other night. This lends a whole new direction to vampiric fiction.
I though it outstanding.
Pretty good, loved how you concentrated on sensation rather than action.
but really good. Unlike a lot of vampire stories which use vampirism as a springboard for sex, this stays focussed on the vampires and the purest forms of eroticism (control, supplication, the total mingling of two souls...all that poetic shtuff). If you're not into it, you're not into it. But if you are, or can appreciate it, then it is a wonderful little bite sized piece. (Get it, bit? haha)