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The There Beyond

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/11/06

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A nice inspired write
And different view
Of what will follow...

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by f-cynyr01/11/06

the rhythm

of this poem is wonderful ,and the images are searing. so sad and you were able to bring this out. there beyond my soul shall weep. just love that line.

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by My Erotic Trail01/11/06

golden

there beyond, captivating write.

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U01/14/06

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running out of things to say!
you know what i think,,,
great as always!;)
**HUGS**
T

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