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by Anonymous

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by Angeline01/12/06

Interesting!

I like the way you've made rhyme work in this poem. I don't recognize the quote--is it something you wrote or are you quoting someone else? You might want to think about breaking the lines differently so the quote stands out more. Seemed to me like it needs be more set off from the lines before and after it.

Thanks for the read. :)

--Angeline

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by LeBroz01/12/06

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Enjoyed the read
Especially the last strophe.

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by My Erotic Trail01/12/06

nice write

and again I say...I enjoyed reading your poetry

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U01/14/06

always a pleasure...

as always...
your poems are intriguingly different and thought provoking... you stand alone in a crowded see friend!

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