All Comments on 'The Teenager on Video'

After reading Jenni at college I looked you up and read all your stories. You appear to have just started. There is a theme in all your stories that is quite clear. All main characters, especially the story teller, always seem to be detached from the action, as if they are voyeurs. The result is a lack of passion when the story begs this. Even a blackmailer would need more action to satisfy his desires.

You also have a habit of using the same props :- Two books, same girl type, French Chardonnay etc.. All mature main characters should by now have learnt that Chardonnay is only drunk by immature or occasional wine drinkers. These men should be drinking full bodied red wines from Italy, Spain, Australia and, yes France.

Having read only one Baxter story-(teen on video)-I agree with critic#1: no passion. But after looking for quality in this category for two years, this ain't bad. For a man! Rape tales written by kids FOR kids are the norm here; the cruder the sex and descriptions the better!(Female authors turn me on much more using softer language) Along comes a perfectly-written tale, very believable and mildly erotic, how can I not encourage and approve? Yeah, I'll read more!

Reminds me of back when I babysat for the neighborhood. Quite a few fathers gave me my sexual education on the drive home. Even a mom or two thought I needed a good tongue lashing.