All Comments on 'Life anew...'

by OralFixxxation

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drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonover 18 years ago
Congratulations

On your first submission. I really liked it. Awesome job. I cant wait to see your first story now!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Welcome to Lit

With a very good first submission

And a mystery love

Of two who'll never meet;

Looking forward to further submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So sweet

How unexpected to come across such a pure and touching sentiment in this forum. I look forward to seeing more of your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Terrific effort.

Dear Oral. I was very plesantly surprised to find such a

sensitive yet clearly expressed set of lyrics that doesn't rely on eroticism to heighten the poem's appeal.

The qualities you described in your bio seem to be reflected in "Life Anew."

Congratulations. And More of the same, Please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Touching

What a touching and lovely poem. You made my heart sing. Thanks for the smiles.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wonderful!!

What a wonderful poem that seems to come straight from your heart! It was a pleasure reading it and I look forward to reading more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Beautiful!

Reading such a beautifully written story one realises how lucky this man is. A beautiful woman writing such wonderful sweet words.

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