Even though it was over quicker than I'd like, I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks!
Great detective story!
This is a fun story, a bit hard to believe, but a really good read, deserves a follow up. Would have liked a little more description of the protagonists
well first of all the story was unrealistic and second the dialogue was forced!!!!
none of it flowed naturally!!
story never concluded properly either!!
no good description!!
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