All Comments on 'Pervasive'

by annaswirls

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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practicing for Valentine's day?

LiarLiarover 18 years ago
Non-erotic?

Yeah, right. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dandy as candy

A good poem that hits that sweet tooth and satisfies.

oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
like much...

"come roast in my heat"...great line!

ReltneReltneover 18 years ago
Life the color of jade(d)

"You are afraid your taste buds

have begun to fade into life

as bland as blanched almonds."

Wonderful words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sweet

(and v naughty)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I agree.......

....with Liar! Wrong category, babe! Hot stuff but beautiful, like a Thai dish.

Tess

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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An understated passion

Such as this

Stokes great fires...

TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
Oh, Jesus...

...this is good.

It felt more like a love poem than erotica to me...whichever, I like it. :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006

thanks for the journey

Art~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sweet!

A very romantic poem, AS! I didn't care for the metaphor shift and the imagery in the "roasting" strophe, but liked the rest every much.

Fly

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