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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone01/14/06

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practicing for Valentine's day?

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by Liar01/14/06

Non-erotic?

Yeah, right. :)

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by Anonymous01/14/06

Dandy as candy

A good poem that hits that sweet tooth and satisfies.

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by oregon_gal01/14/06

like much...

"come roast in my heat"...great line!

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by Reltne01/14/06

Life the color of jade(d)

"You are afraid your taste buds
have begun to fade into life
as bland as blanched almonds."

Wonderful words!

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by vampiredust01/14/06

Sweet

(and v naughty)

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by Anonymous01/14/06

I agree.......

....with Liar! Wrong category, babe! Hot stuff but beautiful, like a Thai dish.

Tess

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by LeBroz01/14/06

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An understated passion
Such as this
Stokes great fires...

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by TheRainMan01/15/06

Oh, Jesus...

...this is good.

It felt more like a love poem than erotica to me...whichever, I like it. :)

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by My Erotic Trail01/15/06

mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006

thanks for the journey
Art~

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by Anonymous01/15/06

Sweet!

A very romantic poem, AS! I didn't care for the metaphor shift and the imagery in the "roasting" strophe, but liked the rest every much.

Fly

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U01/16/06

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nice...very nice!

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by Bill Dada01/19/06

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Salty and sweet.

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