All Comments on 'Pervasive'

by annaswirls

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 18 years ago
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practicing for Valentine's day?

LiarLiarabout 18 years ago
Non-erotic?

Yeah, right. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Dandy as candy

A good poem that hits that sweet tooth and satisfies.

oregon_galoregon_galabout 18 years ago
like much...

"come roast in my heat"...great line!

ReltneReltneabout 18 years ago
Life the color of jade(d)

"You are afraid your taste buds

have begun to fade into life

as bland as blanched almonds."

Wonderful words!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sweet

(and v naughty)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I agree.......

....with Liar! Wrong category, babe! Hot stuff but beautiful, like a Thai dish.

Tess

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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An understated passion

Such as this

Stokes great fires...

TheRainManTheRainManabout 18 years ago
Oh, Jesus...

...this is good.

It felt more like a love poem than erotica to me...whichever, I like it. :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006

thanks for the journey

Art~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sweet!

A very romantic poem, AS! I didn't care for the metaphor shift and the imagery in the "roasting" strophe, but liked the rest every much.

Fly

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