All Comments on 'Lonely Turns New'

Nice, hot and erotic. Just too damned short! You merely touched the tip of the sexual iceberg.

that was awesome i loved it, i wish there were more stories like that!!!!!, fantastic story, please you have to write more

This was a good first effort. You did a good job setting the tone and making it hot. It'd be nice if it were a little longer. Also a little bit of motivation for the sex, what made the girl immediately eat the other's ass?