One of the better, in-depth and well-written NEW stories I've read in months!
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Anonymous01/18/06
Great Story
Excellent story. Almost perfect. Wish there was more parts to this story. Written very well. Keep me anticipating what's next. Keep writing more stories like this.
A really well written story, only part that was not believable was some of the computer sequences, if I had a walking and willing wet dream next to me, would not be choking the chicken.
Important for everyone to know that, contrary to this story, a woman must use oral contraceptives for a month (one pack) before she may prevent pregnancy by not ovulating.
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One of the better, in-depth and well-written NEW stories I've read in months!
Great Story
Excellent story. Almost perfect. Wish there was more parts to this story. Written very well. Keep me anticipating what's next. Keep writing more stories like this.
Fantastic
A really well written story, only part that was not believable was some of the computer sequences, if I had a walking and willing wet dream next to me, would not be choking the chicken.
Well Done!
Me jealous? Not while I'm screwing my niece...
Well written story, keep 'em coming!
Awesome!
One of the best I've read ...hot and intense and so realistic! I hope daddy and daughter will be happy for a very long time!
Horrendous
Too contrived, from beginning to end.
Unbelievable characters and unrealistic dialogue, creating an uninteresting story.
Any story with the phrase, "I can't wait for you to fuck me, Daddy," instantly qualifies for the trash heap.
This story recieves a 1, because I can't give it a zero.
GRATE!!!!!!
Some how the mother come there and get in it also .One of the best that I read in a long time ...
SENSATIONAL!!!
Truly one of your best, jack_straw. Oh, but the wait...yet it is always well worth it!
Wonderful lil' story!
Great read.
some ass
great piece of story would have loved to hear he fucked her in the ass as well though
Great tale Jack!
Thanks for the story - 5 Stars!
Oral Contaceptives
Important for everyone to know that, contrary to this story, a woman must use oral contraceptives for a month (one pack) before she may prevent pregnancy by not ovulating.
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