You seriously just keep getting better and better as this story-line develops! Can't wait to see how you're going to top yourself next!
Oh, that's just classic. Wonderfully pulled off, too. Of course the girl/girl sex description was nicely erotic, too. You keep doing well, don't stop now. T
Hillarious, sexy, brilliant, well written and incredibly good.
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ROTFLMAO!!
You seriously just keep getting better and better as this story-line develops! Can't wait to see how you're going to top yourself next!
Classic
Oh, that's just classic. Wonderfully pulled off, too. Of course the girl/girl sex description was nicely erotic, too.
You keep doing well, don't stop now.
T
Brilliant
Hillarious, sexy, brilliant, well written and incredibly good.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Creative Challenge Ch. 16 or
More submissions by Pvidal.